Zellie M. Quinn

Poems, life musings, and writer ponderings…

The Colorful Bottle and the Genie

The Colorful Bottle and the Genie

Some called it a lantern,
When a candle was placed in it
To set off its colors like errant rainbows

Cut glass sapphire blues, ruby reds and emerald greens
Once reflected
A room’s lit chandeliers and flickering candles

Others called it a vase
When it held rare flowers
On the mantle

But really it was just a colorful bottle
Whose undoing had been one too many falls
Damaged just enough

Its glass pieces now chipped, scratched, or missing-
Its once shimmering gold outlines and filigrees
Dull and corroded in the outdoor elements

Discarded in the woods
No longer receiving long gazes
Drawing ‘oohs,’ and ‘ahhs’

Former eyes
Greedy for beauty
Now turned away in a huff

For a long time it lay on the ground
Not fighting its change of fortunes
Not moving at all

One day, in the warmth of the sun
A powerful genie, like a gentle cloudy vapor,
Filled the broken bottle

The poor bottle noticed that the genie carried with it a lovely light
Shining through the chipped colored glass pieces
Now even its gold seemed less dull

“A lie!” swore the bottle

The bottle rolled back and forth in the winds
To unsettle and dislodge the genie
The genie stayed

“Obnoxious!” thought the bottle

It thought it heard the genie laugh softly
But having no ears to hear,
It wondered how it had heard

It rolled itself under the brush
Hidden
A worthless bottle

Fall rains came,
Dead leaves collected in the brush
The bottle was buried alive

The bottle dared not move
Lest it encourage the genie
The genie stayed

Cold winter days came,
Dark winds
Heavy snows froze the bottle

Spring thaws came
The bottle thought the waters that filled it
Would drown the genie

But the genie stayed firm
The bottle began to admire
The steadfast genie

One day it was the bottle that laughed softly
With admiration for the genie
It heard itself, and knew that now it had ears to hear

It reminded itself that it was the genie
That now made the bottle
Beautiful with its light

The bottle, plain though it was, took its place out in the open
Marveling at the genie’s light
That shone through its brokenness.

Zellie M. Quinn

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February 6, 2013 - Posted by | Just Poems, Life Ramblings | ,

3 Comments »

  1. That is really beautiful. I like how you tagged it with Grace and Redemption!

    Comment by Elizabeth Willis Barrett | February 10, 2013 | Reply

    • Thank you Elizabeth- That means a lot to me-!

      Comment by Zellie M. Quinn | February 11, 2013 | Reply

  2. Zellie, this poem is captivating, clever, insightful and beautifully written. I’ve read it several times. I particularly love these lines:
    “The poor bottle noticed that the genie carried with it a lovely light
    Shining through the chipped colored glass pieces
    Now even its gold seemed less dull”

    Really resonated with me and made me think about how so many of us ‘hide our light under a bushel’. Thank you ☀

    Comment by bgbowers | May 16, 2013 | Reply


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